Does writing give you the munchies?

[clarencebunsen]

www.sciam.com/article.cfm?id=science-of-snacks-thinking-makes-you-hungry

I did notice that the writer has a tendency to punctuate fragments and dependent clauses as if they were sentences. Maybe he needs a Twinkee.

[dgriffin]

I got a slight headache reading that piece. He must be a scientist. I have three of them writing on "More Stories!" (I don't know why, except two are friends) and they tend toward a convoluted style.
CB, if I haven't mentioned it before, why don't you write something for:
www.windsweptpress.com/morstor.htm