Post by artsyone on Feb 3, 2021 15:04:28 GMT -5
Good afternoon Clipperphyles. I have excellent news. First the backstory: As we all know, our good and decent friend Dave Griffin shuffled off this mortal coil a while back, but during his time here, he left a legacy, a trove of work, that I was lucky enough to take part in. Dave was lucky, Dave was Irish and if you're Irish you're lucky enough, but Dave was doubly blessed with a dry wit as well as a wry sense of humor and I have here, to present to you, possibly the last story he wrote in the "On Genesee Hill" series: which consists of "Billy's Foley's Morning", "Blame" and this presenting piece," The Living Room." The fact that he wrote it whilst he himself was actively dying makes the title "The Living Room", all the more poignant. This piece has wintered over on my e mail since 2017, because he never gave me permission to share it. He felt it was a "set piece" and therefore very personal, but now that almost four years have passed, I feel that he wouldn't mind if I posted it up.
The story works on many levels and as usual, in Dave's writing, nothing is as it seems. So I give you Dave's opus, this wonderful little short short, about life, death and the meaning of it all.
It was such a long time ago. I was just a boy, but I'll always remember the errand I was sent on that cold morning in the beginning of March 1896, if only because it allowed me to spend a few minutes sitting in the most beautiful apartment home I had ever been in at that point in my life. But, more so, I received a gift that day on my way back downstreet that I have treasured all my life.
It all began when Mr Dalton, the weekend manager for the Wilcox Brothers Jewelry store where I worked on Saturday's, directed me to take a package up to the new Genesee Flats Apartment House; a way up on Genesee Hill in a wealthy part of the city. I asked the elderly man if I might have three cents to take the trolley and he turned and stared at me as if I had asked him to use his wife's corset to make a giant sling shot.
It was a long walk a way up Genesee Hill, but at least I was out from under the wary eye of the old man. At twelve years old I could have walked to Herkimer without sitting down for a rest. I was capable of doing what I saw other kids and even adults doing, but I wished I were indeed an adult and had knowledge to prevent me Dear Old Mither from breathing her last with so much difficulty. God rest her soul, the poor woman. She never deserved a death like that. Had I been a doctor I would have been the best and able to spare her from the misery, but her life passed through my fingers as me Da sat sniffling at the kitchen table and I kept Mam propped up in a kitchen chair, as close to the stove as possible, keeping her warm till the last. That was in the middle of last winter, now a new Spring had come, though it was still quite cold and icy.
The new Genesee Flats was the latest wonder of the city. Seven stories tall! Many would be afraid to go up that far off the ground, but I knew there was an elevator and I had read in the papers just how safely the builders said the place had been constructed. They said that "no fire could ever break our nor spread throughout the building, a common
thing in the cheaper tenements all around Utica."
Anyways, Mr. Dalton was very specific in his orders to me to go around to the back of the place and up the stairs to the sixth floor. He must have read my mind about the elevator. He said it was only for tenants and he would know if I tried anything. Mr. Dalton had spies everywhere. After the final hike up from Deveraux Street I tell you I did not look forward to climbing those back stairs.
I walked up Clinton Place along the South side of the Flats into the service entrance at the back and once inside I went up and up the wooden staircases as quietly as I could and the along the Tradesmen's Corridor to sixth floor, apartment no 56. Girls voices came to me through the heavy back door, one distinctly Irish, the other distinctly American. They were laughing and carrying on. After a time the laughter got louder and I banged at the heavy door more forcefully, so that the hilarity came to a stop.
"Annie get the door!!" the American voice said.
There was a solid click of the lock and then the door swung open effortlessly. Most of the doors I had encountered in my short life either creaked or scraped the floor, but not this one. Before me stood a slender, freckled, red headed girl in a grey dress and a stiff white servant's cap. She put her arms on her hips and leaned towards me:
" Can I help ye, me Boy-o?"
I swallowed hard. "I'm here to deliver a package to a Mrs. John B. Wood." I felt like I wanted to die, or at least just vanish.
"I am to hand it to her personally and to none other." I had practiced the phrase over and over with Mr. Dalton before I had left the store.
" Well, then...deliver it to her personally....! You don't say. Don't be gettin' above yer station with me, Mister. Just you wait!" She shut the door hard. When it opened again, after an eternity, a tall and beautiful brown haired woman was standing there smiling down at me. She was wearing a dress my Mam would have loved.
"How can I assist you, young man." Her voice was like a Sunday church bell, strong and ringing, yet sweet and kind.
The story works on many levels and as usual, in Dave's writing, nothing is as it seems. So I give you Dave's opus, this wonderful little short short, about life, death and the meaning of it all.
The Living Room
by Dave Griffin
2016
by Dave Griffin
2016
It was such a long time ago. I was just a boy, but I'll always remember the errand I was sent on that cold morning in the beginning of March 1896, if only because it allowed me to spend a few minutes sitting in the most beautiful apartment home I had ever been in at that point in my life. But, more so, I received a gift that day on my way back downstreet that I have treasured all my life.
It all began when Mr Dalton, the weekend manager for the Wilcox Brothers Jewelry store where I worked on Saturday's, directed me to take a package up to the new Genesee Flats Apartment House; a way up on Genesee Hill in a wealthy part of the city. I asked the elderly man if I might have three cents to take the trolley and he turned and stared at me as if I had asked him to use his wife's corset to make a giant sling shot.
It was a long walk a way up Genesee Hill, but at least I was out from under the wary eye of the old man. At twelve years old I could have walked to Herkimer without sitting down for a rest. I was capable of doing what I saw other kids and even adults doing, but I wished I were indeed an adult and had knowledge to prevent me Dear Old Mither from breathing her last with so much difficulty. God rest her soul, the poor woman. She never deserved a death like that. Had I been a doctor I would have been the best and able to spare her from the misery, but her life passed through my fingers as me Da sat sniffling at the kitchen table and I kept Mam propped up in a kitchen chair, as close to the stove as possible, keeping her warm till the last. That was in the middle of last winter, now a new Spring had come, though it was still quite cold and icy.
The new Genesee Flats was the latest wonder of the city. Seven stories tall! Many would be afraid to go up that far off the ground, but I knew there was an elevator and I had read in the papers just how safely the builders said the place had been constructed. They said that "no fire could ever break our nor spread throughout the building, a common
thing in the cheaper tenements all around Utica."
Anyways, Mr. Dalton was very specific in his orders to me to go around to the back of the place and up the stairs to the sixth floor. He must have read my mind about the elevator. He said it was only for tenants and he would know if I tried anything. Mr. Dalton had spies everywhere. After the final hike up from Deveraux Street I tell you I did not look forward to climbing those back stairs.
I walked up Clinton Place along the South side of the Flats into the service entrance at the back and once inside I went up and up the wooden staircases as quietly as I could and the along the Tradesmen's Corridor to sixth floor, apartment no 56. Girls voices came to me through the heavy back door, one distinctly Irish, the other distinctly American. They were laughing and carrying on. After a time the laughter got louder and I banged at the heavy door more forcefully, so that the hilarity came to a stop.
"Annie get the door!!" the American voice said.
There was a solid click of the lock and then the door swung open effortlessly. Most of the doors I had encountered in my short life either creaked or scraped the floor, but not this one. Before me stood a slender, freckled, red headed girl in a grey dress and a stiff white servant's cap. She put her arms on her hips and leaned towards me:
" Can I help ye, me Boy-o?"
I swallowed hard. "I'm here to deliver a package to a Mrs. John B. Wood." I felt like I wanted to die, or at least just vanish.
"I am to hand it to her personally and to none other." I had practiced the phrase over and over with Mr. Dalton before I had left the store.
" Well, then...deliver it to her personally....! You don't say. Don't be gettin' above yer station with me, Mister. Just you wait!" She shut the door hard. When it opened again, after an eternity, a tall and beautiful brown haired woman was standing there smiling down at me. She was wearing a dress my Mam would have loved.
"How can I assist you, young man." Her voice was like a Sunday church bell, strong and ringing, yet sweet and kind.
To be continued.